You are being rather forward, Kelzalik. A little too forward, I think.
["I am only looking out for the wellbeing of my Lord and Elde Menancia. I have respected your choice not to compete for the sovereignty, but I cannot sit idly by while you are manipulated--"]
Manipulated? By Ge-- Captain Landau? That's a bold and out of pocket claim.
[Dohalim's voice is clipped and short, as if his patience is wearing thin. and for someone who seemingly has an abundance of patience, that's no small feat.
"Perhaps you are right." Kelzalik's voice is slow, thoughtful. "I just worry, considering his sister's plot against you."
there's a stretch of silence between them before Dohalim speaks up again, voice just as curt as before]
I would suggest what you say next about Serval is careful and thought out.
["You still hold her in high regards even after she plotted to betray you?"]
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["I am only looking out for the wellbeing of my Lord and Elde Menancia. I have respected your choice not to compete for the sovereignty, but I cannot sit idly by while you are manipulated--"]
Manipulated? By Ge-- Captain Landau? That's a bold and out of pocket claim.
[Dohalim's voice is clipped and short, as if his patience is wearing thin. and for someone who seemingly has an abundance of patience, that's no small feat.
"Perhaps you are right." Kelzalik's voice is slow, thoughtful. "I just worry, considering his sister's plot against you."
there's a stretch of silence between them before Dohalim speaks up again, voice just as curt as before]
I would suggest what you say next about Serval is careful and thought out.
["You still hold her in high regards even after she plotted to betray you?"]